Vol+Essay+-+editing+drafts

Hello, gentlemen

Pls form up in pairs for this session. Create a new page for EACH STUDENT and upload your volunteerism essay.

Each student should have one evaluator-partner who will assess the essay for:

1. Intro - CPR format? - effective?

2. Body - Clear topic sentence - Persuasive argument? - any improvement to be made?

3. Conclusion - we'll KIV this for now

Note: - original text: black font - comments & edits by evaluators are to be in RED font

I will be moving around to answer your queries and to guide you through this process.

Cheers, C Low

p.s. ALL WORK for this exercise can be found in our [|4P2's Wetpaint site].