Online+Lesson+-+4+Sep


 * __Online Lesson - 4 Sep__**

Our main focus is to complete the revision wikis by the end of the Sept holidays so that we CAN USE THEM when Term 4 begins.

For that to happen, I would like everyone to do the following:

Refer to the group list below. Each group is to review another group's Revision Wiki. Every group member must post a __**suggestion for improvement**__ in that wiki's FORUM PAGE (e.g. Jun Xiang's group will then post entries in the Environment forum page). Group members may discuss with each other - by posting entries in the forum page. When everyone has posted their comments, the ** GROUP LEADER (first name on each list) ** is to summarise the suggestions in ** ONE FINAL POST **. This entry should give COMPREHENSIVE & CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK (i.e. what is good about the wiki, what is missing/badly done and, finally, an outline of how the wiki should have been organised).
 * __Task 1 - complete by Fri 4 Sep__**

My critique: The following groups are on the right track: - Environment - Science & Technology - Volunteerism

Why? Because they organise their materials according to headings/questions. I can see evidence that they have an overview of the topic and know what they want to achieve with the wiki. However, the later parts of their wikis are still messy and unnecessarily long (too much info - pls cut it down). Obviously, this is work in progress.

The other groups are in critical need of an organisational revamp. That is why we are having this lesson.


 * As an incentive, I will consider this activity as part of your Term 4 OP score. **


 * GROUP ALLOCATIONS

//Crime and Punishment (review Environment wiki)//** 1) Jun Xiang 2) Teng Hui 3) Nigel 4) Delwin 5) Bryan Kor 6) Kester

1) Marcus 2) Yu Ming 3) Jian Yi 4) Zhi Tao 5) Danny Tan 6) Aylwin 7) Nicholas Sim
 * //Environment (review Volunteerism wiki)//**

1) Ren Fei 2) Jiasheng 3) Wan Xin 4) Samuel 5) Jonathan Foo 6) Han Rui
 * //Volunteerism (review Human Rights & Discrimination wiki)//**

1) Chieh Loong 2) Ho Jia Wei 3) Stanley 4) Jin Jie 5) Brian Ho 6) Isaac 7) Kenneth
 * //Human Rights & Discrimination (review Science & Technology wiki)//**

1) Zhi Hao 2) Henry 3) Xiao Bin 4) Shi Rong 5) Jun Yang 6) Benedict
 * //Science and Technology (review Crime & Punishment wiki)//**

Each group will then review the comments/feedback/suggestions. They are then to complete their wiki by the deadline.
 * __Task 2 - complete by Sun 12 Sep__**

I expect quality work, please. Evidence of higher order thinking, organising and sequencing should be present in the way you lay out the content in your wikis.

Smart people know how to cut down the content such that only the relevant materials are captured. Similarly, the content gives adequate coverage to the topic's scope.

8-) C Low